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14 April 2007

Haiku

Warm sun, fresh green leaves
Fluttering against blue sky —
Spring’s jubilant dance.

The other day I was driving home from work, and it was a glorious late afternoon. Here in South Georgia, this is late spring. All the spring bulbs have done their thing in February, and the summer flowers haven't yet kicked in. But spring is still fresh and new, and the landscape is a palette of every possible green. This particular afternoon the sun was golden, which enhanced the colors all the more. I was inspired to write something... words that took a haiku-like form came to mind.

To me, haiku is perfect for capturing a moment — a verbal photograph. I went to Wikipedia and refreshed myself on the traditional haiku form, and learned a bit about the history of haiku. What struck me was a quote on the page: “One Western critic who arrived at an understanding of haiku was Roland Barthes. In his 1970 work Empire of Signs, Barthes wrote that the haiku has the simple meaning of a child pointing his finger at something and saying, ‘this is how it is.’” This is exactly how I felt in the moment.

(It’s funny to look at all I just wrote, and how short the haiku is in comparison. Maybe I would have done better to just let the haiku stand on its own.)

lotus dingbat

3 Comments:

Blogger Bookworm said...

I enjoyed what you wrote PLUS the lovely haiku. I needed the explanation because I had forgotton what it was! The little Zen calendar that I have on my desk has daily writings, some of which are haikus, and I enjoy it very much. It makes me think about things in another realm and move away from the usual. A refreshing feeling.

I have added your blog on my Quality Bloggage list. :)

15 April, 2007 09:10  
Blogger Jordan said...

That was a beautiful haiku. Unfortunately, even though I knew the grammar of a Haiku, and the entire 5-7-5 idea, I never understood what a Haiku WAS. Thank you for teaching me something outside of school.

15 April, 2007 12:40  
Blogger Simon Nolan said...

Thanks Rosie and Jordan. I'm really glad this humble post enhanced your appreciation for haiku. The funny thing is, this is my first haiku since maybe the 3rd Grade, even though haiku-like phrases float through my mind all the time when I'm alone and quiet and looking at nature. I have a big, warm smile inside thanks to your comments.

(Rosie, I'm moving my blog to WordPress, so maybe you should link me there: http://simonnolan.wordpress.com . Thanks for linking to me!)

05 May, 2007 11:16  

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